Sky Castles

Building castles high

 

Only to tumble again

 

My dreams, unfulfilled

Reviews

[Sparrow]

I gave this a mental awww as I read it. It reminded me of the advice to dream big if you're going to bother dreaming." Keep building those castles, eventually one of them will stick! Thank you for submitting to my contest.

[Kara Emily Krantz]

ah ha! great senryu. i really like this... the sand, the way you worded it went really well; kept it flowing just the right way. :)

nice job my dear