Letting Go

It's not the greatest writing ever but oh well.

Break free, break free

Don't want to see

Just leave me be

I wish I couldn't love

Send me to the place above

Where I will finally be enough

Get out of my sigh, I'm blind

The love I feel is not the best kind

Chain me here with ropes I'll bind

My senses numbing quickly now

My heart pounds as I wipe sweat from my brow

My blood is churning, slowing as I drown

Won't say good bye to friends

I'll walk until I find the end

Just one more light beyond the bend

My body soon starts to chill

Words don't hurt, they kill

One more bottle to drink the pill

From up above I look down below

The grass at home won't be mowed

I watch silently as a bird sits on stone, a crow

They mournfully lower the box into the ground

The body present, her soul not found

Little do they know her soul has been bound

It flies to seek out the weak

Giving them comfort on days that are bleak

And to help them last just one more week

I'll be remembered as the girl who gave in

The pressure too much is evident on my skin

To those who did this, congrats you win

I won't wake up in the morning

The tears have finally stopped pouring

My happiness is finally soaring

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

well, it's really a nice write, who says it's not much good, but ohh well, yeah...it's ohh well..lol,when i read your tittle, i was thinki' what's that in real, but as i started to read, then i got my answer, that's what i 'dread, well, i've founded here somme lines that i did like,
I won't wake up in the morning
The tears have finally stopped pouring
My happiness is finally soaring....these lines're nice, lovely, to read, well, for your kind info. me too really don't wake up in the mornin', ...lol it's too hard to wake in mornin' to me..lol
ans moreover i liked some these lines more
My body soon starts to chill
Words don't hurt, they kill
One more bottle to drink the pill....lol, these lines're funny, quite nice and interestin' to read, i was chucklin' as i read these one's...i think you got skills, liked this poem.
well written, it's good one.

[Ali]

Thank you (:

[NibbleLove]

I love this :)

[Ali]

Thanks (: