The End

Shadows, stillness in the darkest depth

the infinite end awaits with pools of blackness

and intensness

I cannot see, I cannot hear

or smell divine is commeth here

nor sight, nor sound, to me it's clear

the deepest pools of blackness here

Indeed it's here, no sight nor sound

yet loudness all around

tis not clear the source nor sound

and yet it's all around

the deepest blackness and darkest

pools of ebony do me surround and

of all my days abound

the shadows, stillness and darkest depth to me resound

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

the deepest pools of blackness here . Very haunting.
Well penned poem.

[Ali]

Thanks so muc for your comment

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Soul Fire]

Very nice! Beautiful flow!

[Ali]

Thank you so much

[Owlgirl]

Wow! Nice imagery, your vocabulary blossoms in the smooth flow of the poem, great job!

[Ali]

Thanks so much for reviewing, it is really kind of you and thanks for the lovely comment, it is appreciated.

[Owlgirl]

Lol you're welcome. It really is a great poem, with things like this you'll get more reviewers very quickly :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

I imagine it will be just as you say......Very well written piece of imagination....Thanks for letting us share it with you

[Ali]

Thank you so much for reading...I wasn't sure anyone would read it, since there is so much poetry on here. I really appreciate you taking the time and your positive comments.

[Dr. Wood ?]

You will be surprised at how many people just sit and read here...As if they are in a library. I did not start with many reviews, my stuff is a little different in that it is for kids and is based on humour. But poetry like your own will soon get noticed..believe me

[Ali]

Well thank you again, I have not written any poetry for nearly 20 years...a long story... but I was recently inspired to write again and I am having trouble containing it all now, I think I locked it away for far too long and even if only a few people read it, it will be worth it. Thanks again.

[Dr. Wood ?]

this site can make writing addictive, I never stop now...but then it isn't too deep....jokes come easy and rhymes are something I have been doing since I was seven...ALL those years ago..See if you can stop