O'Harrahin's

Okay so I really wanted to build up some stuff before I posted again, but this was just too much fun. Based off of good old fashioned stereotypical Irish folk music.

Oh ne'er I seen

Such a wonderfull sight

As the merry old bar

O'Harrahin's at night

'Cus when the beer gets a flow'n

and our manner's get slight

all the boys gather 'round for a merry old fight.

 

The bar's green for now but

we'll soon turn it red

fist and elbow to chest

chair and glass to the head

'till the barman steps up

says we'll all turn up dead

don't smash all his new chairs

use this old one instead.

 

We all head home sore

at a stumbling pace

to wake up next sunday

and all say our grace

and on thing is for sure

there'll be a smile on my face

though I'm miss'n some teeth

it all turns up ace.

Author's Note

I'm not trying to offend anyone, it's just supposed to be funny. So please, tell me, what should I do here? Make a chorus? Suggestions are welcome.

Reviews

[Sam Davidson]

That's brilliant, sounds just like an Auld Oirish drinking song. There are, however, some telling hints of 21st Century desperation which add extra depth. While it's hilarious, there is a feeling of deeper tone, the kind of thing which really marks you out as a great writer. Oscar would be proud.