Daddy, please

A poem I hoped I'd never have to write

Daddy, please

Please release

 

Your unreasonableness

Your unforgiving

 

And let me come home

Come home to my abode

 

Where I belong

It’s been so long

 

Do you miss me?

Do you cry for me?

 

Don’t you see the truth?

Deep beneath the muse?

 

Daddy, please

 

I beg of you

 

Let me come home.

 

 

Reviews

[chandlerl]

Soft, rich with emotion and carries a deep ring of sadness to it.

[ayele marie dalmeida]

this is just so sad and i love how you put how you put such a painful thing into this short poem. its a very powerful poem. hope to read more from you. :)

[kublakhan27]

A painful reality that nobody should have to endure, yet so many of us must. You're not alone in this predicament. Well-said and well-written.

[AleyshaRosa]

Beautifully sad my friend, I felt the loss and pain in this one, you write from your heart, I can say.

Home is were you will be one day.... and together. You have a fine pen...

- Elisa

[AleyshaRosa]

Sigh... I hope so...

Thanks, Elisa

I hope it to for you dear xx

[Dayran]

I figure you'll have to get the muse ... to get you home. Nice write.

[tressa]

a sad thing to write....but hopefully some good can come out of it