Buckle

haven't a wonderland clue

The jitter of walls

The flickering in halls

I jump from your grasp

And reach for the clasp

Just below your heart

All the way back to start

So I can unclip that clasp

And slip from your grasp

Reviews

[Archia]

I liked the constant rhyme, it gave it a nice rhythm. I thought the whole clasp idea was really good; it makes it a tad ominous but not fully.

[AleyshaRosa]

For sure
Thanks for the review, Archia =]

[Dayran]

To come back again ... and begin anew without clasps. Wonderful ... tender ...

[zainul]

Very sweet and smart piece.
Enjoyed a lot.

[alan khan]

I liked this, I enjoy short and concise poems and this was spectacular. Powerful in It's symmetry, nice work. Kudos.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Alan =]