Smile.

Smile.

A Poem by AleyshaRosa
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A poem long forgotten

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With a smile

I haven’t seen in awhile

A hug

With a heart long drug

Through the dirt

Of infinite hurt

I sing

To maybe bring

Back that beautiful

Smile.

© 2013 AleyshaRosa


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Smiles are nice! They are a good way to really brighten someone's day.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Put that way ... a smile certainly appears like the sweetest thing in the world. For that I might have done an entire aria. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Dayran

It's so nice to see your reviews again... =]
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ron
I am sure your voice would be like Angels singing from the Heavens. Great poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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AleyshaRosa

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Ron
Though I beg to differ =P
ron

11 Years Ago

I think your passion would be like a slow moving tidal wave moving over their heart.
Sometimes you have to sing to forget the blues... it may very well bring your smile back...
Never give up, that's my advice. Well done, AleyshaRosa. ~xoxo~:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Robbie =]
Robbie~xoxo~

11 Years Ago

My pleasure. :)
This poem let my imagination run a bit. This poem touched my heart. Its concise but bursts with meaning and emotions. Lovely work
CC

Posted 11 Years Ago


AleyshaRosa

11 Years Ago

Thanks, CC
I appreciate the review, and I agree. Your comment couldn't have been said better; .. read more
Chaos_Collector

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome Aleysha. Hope to stop by and read more works from you :)

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Added on November 3, 2013
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Tags: poetry, smile, love, beauty, pain, redemption

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AleyshaRosa
AleyshaRosa

Abbotsford, BC, Canada



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