The Bee's Knees

the birds and the bees

with their wobbly knees

the yes and the no

a flabbergasted stop go

the you and I

a slice of pissed off pie

the black and white

a constantly grey fight

it's all the same to me

it's not about who you be

it's about what you see

that's what allows to you be free

like those birds and bees

they fly, buzz free

and that yes and no

in the ground they sow

the possibilty of maybe

the sly words to cheat

and you and I

we should slice up humble pie

and stop this frugal fight

for the illusion of might

not to mention the black and white

unaware of the iridescent light

neither black nor white

neither wrong nor right

it's all the same to me

it's not about who you be

it's about what you see

that's what allows to you be free

Reviews

[Dark Butterfly]

coolbeans,
"the black and white
a constantly grey fight"
my favorite part, it makes so much sence! if someone is right(white) and someone is wrong (black) they will keep on fighting each thinking their right but niether is really right

[AleyshaRosa]

Totally! My thoughts exactly! And black white/wrong and right get so tangled into one another that grey is the product!
Thanks, DB

[Tunder]

"the you and I
a slice of pissed off pie"
favorite stanza. well done, nice work though I'm not sure how to interpret this completely. 90/100

[AleyshaRosa]

Mine too =]

Thanks, Tunder =]
Interpretation... Sigh. I don't even know. I should just make an authors note of that.. =P

[TheLastEclipse]

You never disappoint me... Enough said.
90/100

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, TLE =]
Though... I'm not even sure what it means =P

[TheLastEclipse]

I feel that way about most of my work...
It can take months or even years to understand mine...

[AleyshaRosa]

No kidding...

[X]

I like it. I too am searching for the symbolism. Would like to see one more stanza. Nice rhyming!

X

[AleyshaRosa]

I don't even know where the symbolism is. LOL
Thanks for the compliment on rhyming, I'm getting mixed opinions on it...

[X]

Well I like it.

X (Formerly known as V)

[AleyshaRosa]

Well good =]
Haha yeah, same profile pic =]

[X]

:)

[Jordan's Back]

This is intriguing. but very allusive. I know theirs symbolism here, I just couldn't find it...... It Flows well

[AleyshaRosa]

I couldn't even find the symbolism. LOL
Thanks though =]

[Jordan's Back]

no Problem :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

pretty good. I think you matbe tried too hard to find the rhymes..but it still worked out ok

[AleyshaRosa]

This is true. My rhyme scheme did feel a bit sticky when I was writing it...
But thanks, Dr. Wood =]

[Dr. Wood ?]

that's ok....All it takes is a little patience