aw, maybe the underworld creature was just trying to be friendly! Or maybe not... eheheheh..... yeah, most likely not.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Haha, yeah, "friendly" *cough cough*. Isn't that what they all say?
I was just offering you th.. read moreHaha, yeah, "friendly" *cough cough*. Isn't that what they all say?
I was just offering you that roofied margarita to be "friendly"!
=P
Love is always view with a positive connotation. It's interesting to read a change in that where love isn't the happiness everyone always says it is. This poem was amazing; I read it twice. It has a beautiful rhythm about it, and the last line, well who could have seen that coming? Bravo! One of your best yet! 100/100 ~Tunder~
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Tunder!
Honestly, I get quite sick of happy, lovey dovey poems.
I di.. read moreThank you so much, Tunder!
Honestly, I get quite sick of happy, lovey dovey poems.
I didn't even see the last line coming!
=P Thanks again
everyone's saying it's spooky but.. it's like set in a very real setting... it's about the feeling of depression brought on by an a*****e guy. how is that not obvious?
Well, I suppose you could look at it that way...
I was referring to the event in a very litera.. read moreWell, I suppose you could look at it that way...
I was referring to the event in a very literal sense, but hey, depression definitely comes with a******s. =P
11 Years Ago
yeah, that's what i was saying... everyone was treating this like an abstract thing or a fantasy or .. read moreyeah, that's what i was saying... everyone was treating this like an abstract thing or a fantasy or something... idk
11 Years Ago
Ooooh I see. Well, many levels covered I suppose. =]
This poem was eerie and spooky, and shows a darker side of love. I loved it. I think the stanza I put here was the clincher for the depth of the abnormality. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks, TR =]
Definitely. That's actually my favourite verse as well. I figure, enough .. read moreThanks, TR =]
Definitely. That's actually my favourite verse as well. I figure, enough of the cheese we call love. There is a side we don't see; grimy fingers that reach for something not theirs.
Aaaaaaaaaaand shees back!! This is truly an "Aleysharosa" piece! Loved the dark feel to it the most:)
Well
Done
-roshan
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Haha thanks, Roshan!
Inspiration has come! Dark inspiration... but inspiration nonetheless! Oh.. read moreHaha thanks, Roshan!
Inspiration has come! Dark inspiration... but inspiration nonetheless! Oh, AleyshaRosa how I've missed you...
Canadian, eh? I've been writing since I was 13 (I'm now 18) and have recently started back up on writing a novel that I'm now half through.
I mostly write prose poems and short stories with a tonne .. more..