W***e

call me hoe

call me w***e

go ahead

make me sore

let me fight

let me bite

yes i know

its not right

but do you care

if it's fair

besides

we make a good pair

listen

i don't mind the pain

i don't mind the games

but all i need

is a pill to keep me sane

and a good home for my name

dont tell me you love me

dont tell me i'm free

i'm not dumb, i can see

that you're not who you say you are to be

so

call me hoe

call me w***e

go ahead

leave me sore

but i wont fight

and i wont bite

no, don't worry

i'll take everything that's right

and shove it down your throat.

Reviews

[Pax]

You packed your words powerful punch...great job...

[AleyshaRosa]

As always, always
Thanks, Pax

[Rakhsharimaya]

I like the words. good one.

[AleyshaRosa]

=] Thank you

[h d e rushin]

doe's that last stanza mean, the person who is capable of giving pleasure is
also, so very willing, to offer pain?

if a w***e walks down the street, everyone notices her. she is always a red-hot
coal, an illuminant. She is despised for being so obviously available but sought
after for the very same reason. I took the "leave me sore" line to mean a constant
redicule and not the result of any physical intensity.

there are a lot of mixed messages here. good work, dana

[AleyshaRosa]

Mmm the last stanza means the w***e who is undergoing all this pain is sick of it. She's done with being taken, then left once more to rot on the street with a meager $20 in her pocket.

I never thought of "leave me sore" in that sense, but I makes sense. Thanks for viewing it in a different light.

As long as the mixed messages aren't too confusing =P

Thanks =]

[Steven Cash]

Definite spice and anger

Also a little tired feeling from all the crap

[AleyshaRosa]

Tired feeling?
Enlighten me

[Steven Cash]

tired of dealing with life's hardships

[AleyshaRosa]

yeah. exactly

[RachelReaper]

this has got some spice to it, a fighting edge which I LOVE. I love powerhouse poems like this that are fierce all the way through.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks
RAWR

I just posted another poem similar to 'f**k' called 'c**t' LOL
Raunchy much?

[RachelReaper]

haha, yeah, all part of your charm, right? lol

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh most definitely. =P

Think about it, know another other poems that have such and outright rude title? I'm breaking rules.
ehee

[RachelReaper]

*gasps* you outlaw! haha jk

[AleyshaRosa]

=D

[Jack Reaper]

oh, i love how you end these things.. theyre always sad and despairing (i personally hate violence of any kind against women) and then you just "shove it down your throat." truely excellent

[AleyshaRosa]

=D
After writing most of it, I came to the end and felt really depressed about the whole thing and what had even motivated me to write it.
"shove it down your throat" seemed like the only suitable solution
Thanks, Jack

[Jack Reaper]

indeed a good one.. do i need to get "vicious" on someone?

[AleyshaRosa]

definitely =P

[That_Girl]

"AleyshaRose wants you to read W***e" Well it doesn't take much more to get me to frantically click lol

I love it! Spicy! :D

[That_Girl]

*Rosa... sorry... got abit excited. ;)

[AleyshaRosa]

Haha that's the reaction I was hoping for
Glad you liked it =]

I can't remember if you commented on it, but 'f**k' has a got a similar spice. Have a glance =]

Thanks, TG

[That_Girl]

I loved it! :) And yes, I did read 'f**k'. Loved it too. :)

[Michael Thrower]

Loved f**k.

[That_Girl]

I love f**k. ;)

[Michael Thrower]

(;

[AleyshaRosa]

We'll I think we can all agree we love f**k(...ing)

[That_Girl]

Yes ma'am! ;)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks guys. Shall I start up on some more slam poetry then?

[That_Girl]

YES! Would love to read it! :)

[Michael Thrower]

Yes, I need some new... Material ;)

[That_Girl]

Ha! S**t lol

[AleyshaRosa]

Posting in a min here UNO MOMENTO

[Michael Thrower]

I'll be ready.

[AleyshaRosa]

c**t is posted

[That_Girl]

Will read tonight! :D

[NathanBlackie]

i like your recent works, it's like you're artistically venting.

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, Nathan. My recent works are also my most recent writings. Most of the ones that I had first posted were from years ago.
Every since "You Lie" everything... flowed better.
Thank again