Lies.

they're here

oh I fear

all these

Mirrors

screaming

saying

all these things I

Cannot

why are you doing

this, oh all this cooing

i'm trying to

Tell

myself it's not true

all these thing I do

please, i am clean.

Lies.

Reviews

[That_Girl]

Oh goodness... I love it! The structure is obviously badass but really the content is great as well. Nicely done girly! :D

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks, TG =]
Ha! Badass ;D Chea!

[Faffy]

This is wonderful Aleysha lOve the structure and the idea behind this well done :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks so much, Roshan!
Idea that's I'd had since I was 15, but couldn't figure out how to write it. Wah La!
=P

[AsTheKissIgnites]

man, you should be professional ;)

[AleyshaRosa]

oh wow...
Thanks, AKI!

[Tunder]

I love this. It is so unique! I've never seen a poem like this before, and I love the desperation and pleading in the voice! Lovely, as usual!

[AleyshaRosa]

As usual, thanks Tunder

[Tunder]

np:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

excellent formatting...the side by side creating two separate poems that combine as one.



can read one without the other...

what the mirror shows us is what it is...the mirror cannot lie.

and what we see inside often scares us and scars us more.

jacob

[AleyshaRosa]

So very true
Thanks, Jacob

[B-poet]

The stairway of truth and wisdom is highly visible before our eyes. It's very true that mirrors cannot tell lies! Great job. I really loved this one. I enjoy your penmanship. I don't know if you have any favorite poems from my collection, but your poem here will be one of my favorites from yours. :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks so much!
I can't believe how quickly this poem became popular!
If you haven't yet read Sing, I highly suggest it =]

[AleyshaRosa]

Feel free to RR me with any of your work =]

[Pax]

Mirrors and the thoughs that speak of ourselves. The truth that hides in the depths of the mind. Great work.

[AleyshaRosa]

Exactly, Pax
Thanks

[pigsdofly]

now you remind of a famous writer from my country who changed the whole nation literature ... and this type of writing I enjoy the most ... personally, I'm not good at it, but I appreciate everyone who is ... cheers

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks! Ii'm very appreciative of reviews like this.
Who was this famous writer anyway?

[pigsdofly]

well, idk if you know his name, but he was like the superstar of the Symbolism haha ... and I'm sure you're good at it as well

[AleyshaRosa]

Well, i don't know his name. What is it?
If you want, have a glance at my book Trip (don't worry, the "chapter" are very short. ) Packed with symbolism

[RachelReaper]

I am telling you, you are either Ellen Hopkins in disguise on WC (which wouldn't surprise me if you actually were a famous author in disguise) or you are just incredibly talented at her same kind of poetry. A.W.E.some

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh my word,
thank you so much, Rachel
I never thought I be compared to such a great writer (awe-mazing =0 )
=D
No... I only wish I were a famous author... soon... soon..

[Steven Cash]

I love this one

Especially as a horror writer, I love it cause mirrors are spooky

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh, they most definitely are.
When I looked in the mirror this morning... Well hot damn, what a hot tamale. Interesting inspiration...
Thanks, Steven.
If you want something, creepy (but a bit gritty) I can't remember if I already RR-ed you, but have a glance at "Secrets"

[Steven Cash]

iDK if you did either

am nearly 80 deep

[AleyshaRosa]

oh.. well thenn...

[Steven Cash]

yea ill find it soon

[AleyshaRosa]

haha ohk