Sneer

i need a break from lovey-dovey. don't you?

don't you laugh at me

don't you sneer

i know exactly why you're here

don't you tip your nose

don't you cross your arms

oh you wait, wait for karma

you see, you don't know

you don't understand

this isn't how you planned

how amusing, how amusing

oh, you silly boy

i am not your toy

you better not cry

when my hand hits your cheek

because boy, your future is bleak

it was so nice, right?

i remember those days

those games of simon says

now, now,

you listen to me

no, no, don't you plea

i'm going to close this door

i'm going to turn the lock

don't you dare knock

you better stay there

you sit and rot

maybe think a thought

you think about what you did

I'll laugh

oh, boy I'll sneer

you know exactly why you're here.

Reviews

[i'mjustalonelywriter]

I can relate :) Definitely makes me feel better! It's great :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Thanks =]
Felt great to write, too

[Tunder]

fierce!! great job:)

[AleyshaRosa]

Rawr! Thanks, Tunder

[Gina]

Ha ha, Love it

[AleyshaRosa]

=P
Thanks

[RachelReaper]

dang, you go girl! I liked the line, "those games of simon says" I thought that was original, and I liked it. It made me smile how it did a 360 from him sneering in the begininning to you sneering in the end. Epic turnaround!

[AleyshaRosa]

Oh yeah! Thanks (as alwaaays) Rachel =]

[GypsyAlien3303]

You tell him! This is great. I really liked it. :)

[AleyshaRosa]

Well thank ya, GA
=]
Oh yeah, I told him =D

[Poison Ivy]

I love this because it shows a sense of pride and the process of over coming the jerks that live in this world and decide to judge.


you better not cry
when my hand hits your cheek
because boy, your future is bleak


wonderful

[AleyshaRosa]

Definitely. I'm almost tired of the sad, wallowing poems. Thought I'd change it up and instead of crying over his loss, punching the b*****d in the face =P
Thanks PI

[Poison Ivy]

always a good thing to do :)

[Steven Cash]

Hmmm curious

I liked it

[Jack Reaper]

*doesnt laugh and doesnt sneer at you!* this gives me an "aha! f**k you!" sense that i must say, i love. ive given the same sense in some of my work, though mine always comes out much more violently. another great one, keep em comin

[AleyshaRosa]

Thank ye, Jack
haha laugh and sneer and *click*

[NathanBlackie]

Well i'm assuming he deserved it?

[AleyshaRosa]

That "he" was quite awhile ago, and he sure as hell did.