Don't Call Me Beautiful

Don't Call Me Beautiful

A Poem by emoALEX;3
"

Mark "

Verse One:

Don't say I'm pretty

don't say I'm kind

You'll know the real truth

flaws you have yet to find

 

I'm not what I seem

the monster is inside

you'll never see it

in check I keep it

 

Bridge:

Oh please don't run away

I'll take all of the blame

Just stay with me for now

Until we get this sorted out

 

Chorus:

Until then...

Don't call me beautiful

Don't say I'm nice

Don't make me fall in love with you

'Cause that ain't right

Don't make this hurt us

than it can

We can do this

Give me your hand

 

Chorus:

We'll go our seperate ways

Not one of us will stay

Don't come back to this town

not when I'm around

 

Because then

all the memories

will flood back in

All the sacrifice

that wore me

thin

all the heartache

and the compromise

for what?

(Pause)

To shakily harmonize?

 

(Repeat Chorus)

 

Bridge:

Don't make me fall

back in love with you

Even though both of

us want to

Don't hurt me like you did before

or I'll walk back out your kitchen door

 

(Repeat Chorus)

 

Whispering:

God, I still love you.

© 2012 emoALEX;3


Author's Note

emoALEX;3
Me and my boyfriend broke up, and it was real hard for me, but this is the product of that hurt.

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If the product of a break up is writing a song, then by the time you are 18 "like most of us experience" you are going to have loads to write about!! : ) It's a short song with only beautiful verses and these 4 choruses to recite to memory with ease. Do you have a Youtube channel where it is sung or danced to with your "street crew"? I love it. It is pretty cool to see a song that reads like a poem because I take a lot of songs written these days, for granted, and forget that most are probably written as poems first, if not very close to one that is appreciated. I Love stopping by your page.... xoxo -Your Mark






Posted 11 Years Ago


The actual writing was great. But The I beleive you need to make a correction. Where there's two choruses one underneath the other, either it needs to be all one chrous, or one needs to be verse 2. But like I said, the actual writing was great

Posted 11 Years Ago


emoALEX;3

11 Years Ago

Oops, that was supposed to be a Verse 2, yeah. I'll fix it when I'm not feeling lazy XD
David the writer

11 Years Ago

XD> I know how that is
emoALEX;3

11 Years Ago

Haha ye :#

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