Depression

Most regretful decision

Am I crazy?
Maybe.
After falling for you.
I can't believe you.

You know I'm not strong enough to hit you.
So you take advantage.
I'm sick of it.

Should I let you go?
I should.
Your nothing but a dick.

But, I'm not strong enough to do it.
So I'm just gonna' let you stomp over me.
No!

I won't tollerate your manipulative ways.
Your big, silver eyes.
Your sly smile.

Your immaculant skin.
Your personality.
And your beauty that leaves me amazed.

No.
I'm just gonna' piss you off.
You'll slap me.

Maybe that'll give me the strength.
Maybe it won't.
But who knows?

Your just a pile of trash.
You wont amount to anything.
Just get rejected.

Now what?
Did I make you mad?
Hope I did.

*Smack*

I guess I did.
I'll hope i never get to see you again.
Goodbye my ex-friend.

Reviews

[Lexi]

I love the straight forwardness of it and the story. I can see emotion as well as visualize what'd going on. It's really quite good :)

[Michael X]

I really like style, straight sentencing, justifies your thoughts nicely, masterfully
aslo the way you explained depression as being a friend, that is heartwrenching because
to ponder the aspect of such in an emotional relationship makes perfect sense,
just the overall energy and vibrance put forth is powerful and exceptionally well written

[Kate Wing]

I like this piece. I can see you weighing up the options and shifting back and forth between them.