this isn't love...

Love
is a powerful word
it mean's
your heartbeat
is the music to her ear's
Love is that you think about them
every second of the day
people say it only take's a day to be in love but no it take's week's
or month's
you have to know everything about them
fell her pain
When she's happy your heart should smile
when she's sad you cry
you don't love me...

Author's Note

this isnt really a poet it's just something i told someone
he barely new me and told me he loves me
so i said this ^^^ and i saved it because i realized tthat wasn't the first time someone said it to me so just in case i don't have to rewrite it> and i posted it on here as a poet because its what i express myself as

Reviews

[Trevor Jay Bloodworth]

Agree with this. You don't fall in love with a person in a matter of minutes. It doesn't work like that.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

i agree, Guys everyday i just meet say those words and its all bullshit.

[Invisible]

i can appreciate this piece for what you're saying, even though i'm not sure i could exactly say the same.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

thank you and i think you can fall for someone over night but what i was saying was the love process takes a few day's (or weeks/months) you know what i mean?

[Invisible]

i think so, at least i can imagine it happening in such a way, but i am not experienced in the ways of love or romance so i can't say for certain, you know what I mean?

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

i think:) btw your reading my s****y pieces scar's.. is my fav and payattion next time love

[Invisible]

pay attention to what? sorry i'm a man so i'm kinda slow to pick up things sometimes lol. and you're welcome.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

im saying your reading my crappy writing my favorite poet's by me are "scar's...."
& "payattenion next time love "

[Invisible]

oh, well i'm not sure you should dog your own writing, nor would i ;)
i am paying attention! XD

[James Huston]

Exactly what love should be.