Strong..part 2 of broken glass, poem.

Secret wishes was wrote for the person in this poem

My love,
oh dear, love.
i might be a hypocrite
but this isn't the way to go
you called me your hero
then you fell in love
your life became stressed
so then you wanted to end it all
No my love
my dear, love.
it wasn't that at all
you never knew
what was waiting for you
my love,
my dear, love.
people hurt
people cried
i wasn't the only one
why
because..
my love, my love
today isn't the end
instead you will have to live.
my love,
my dear,love.
i know the feeling,
i know the pain,
i knew the reason's,
but you won't ever know....
my love,
oh my dear, love
your joke's are cruel
and i was such a fool
but today love,
will be the last day
my love,
Oh my dear, love...
The End

Reviews

[Admiral Kirk]

Wow, this is really sweet... Sounds like you're almost crying through the poem, and you make it feel like the reader was a part of this too. Well done.