payattenion next time love

Even though you were a cheat
i remand your bestfriend
even though you were mean
i still needed you...
Even though i hurt
you tried to put yourself first
even though...
Then there was Him
the sweet,carefree,Guy
we become bestfriend's
and you..
you just never non
that later on
me and him
Fell for each other
Now your gone
my old friend.
have fun
with your s**t's
i have my own man...

Reviews

[James Huston]

thats a good poem, sounds cold though, i like that. good use of words tho :

[Adil Shamim Khan]

lovely poem with immense feeling.. i personally loved it...

[Zap-the-awesome]

Buuuurn! And good poem.

[ÅŁєxx ƒσx]

Hahaha lol thank's