Apocalyptic love

Lily pad ocean circle disks,
Black pits sit centered.
Connected so deeply,
I don't want to blink.
I don't want to breathe,
Until you're here with me.

I will love you til the oceans dry,
I would wait til the very end...
Just to hold you in my arms,
Whilst awaiting the end.

Sapphire ovals swell and descend,
Strength isn't so easy to fake.
Doubt forms like vortex,
A collage of wishes ruined.
I'll hold onto faith until
My fingers break.

I will love you til the oceans dry,
I would wait til the very end...
Just to kiss you sweetly,
Whilst awaiting the end.

Concrete sculptures sit and remain,
Thankfully I found you just in time.
Still bodies empty of soul embrace
One another awaiting their fate,
Our fate on the other side.
Will you be with me?

Reviews

[Dayran]

A love that is beyond legends, romance, knowledge and the epistemology of love is hard to satisfy physically. We can work on a new cosmology. But, it may be to die for .......

[Kaylor Mason]

I can't imagine a better way to put it than that. Who could argue with that kind of dream? Love is a strange, frightening, terrible, wonderful thing . . . always full of hope, beyond all else. I love your wording in this--it flows like a gentle ocean current (unless I read it wrong, that's what you intended when you wrote it; I guess--I don't know) Anyhow, fricking awesome writing!