Without you.

This is pretty s****y, I just needed to write.

Much like the wind, I felt you slipping further away from me.
I would've fallen to my knee's to scream, but you'd exhausted all of me.
You failed to check the mirror upon breaking me down, I still
had your heart wrapped in twine and draining. You really thought
you had the upper hand? Look at me now, I am smiling again. I am
laughing, and learning, and loving again. You put me through hell,
but I surfaced to Earth again. You won't be this strong, when someone
puts you through all you put me through. I hope you regret your
decisions, I hope one day you wonder why, and I hope answers allude you.

I am fine, really fine. I am dancing, and learning, and loving.
I am living, and feeling, and burning away your image.
I grow a little stronger each day, I grow a little more
optimistic with your absence. This pain became a blessing.

Much like the wind, the force transformed my outcome.
I dreamed of a simple life, just you and I... I wanted to
skip, and leap, and jump into a future, with you. I failed
to notice, you were annoying. We were too different not
to notice, I wanted to live and you were ready to crumble.
I wanted to laugh, and you were stuck adding details
to your past. I gave you all, and you took like a child.
I am so much better without you, so much healthier,
happier, just better... Without you.

Reviews

[WhiteWillow]

There's a reason for everything. Its hard to see that the bad moments will better you, especially when you're living in them. The sun always comes out after a storm. Thanks for sharing your NOT s****y piece.

[Forgotten]

i like it alot :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This is touching and hopeful. Not s****y at all.

"I am fine, really fine. I am dancing, and learning, and loving.
I am living, and feeling, and burning away your image.
I grow a little stronger each day, I grow a little more
optimistic with your absence. This pain became a blessing"...love this...xx

[Cody Michael]

This is really powerful message with strong feelings...the ending really speaks to me
"I am so much better without you, so much healthier,
happier, just better... Without you."
I love it...:D

[EMMIE]

RAW! LOVE IT! I AM SO MUCH BETTER WITHOUT YOU! THAT'S A STRONG VOICE RIGHT THERE. BEAUTIFUL AND POWERFUL WRITE!

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Understanding a better-sweet heartfelt piece. We all have been there.
(This is not “s****y”).
~S. D. Blankenship