How to love.

Just another journey into another day, hoping things go right. Who knows though.

Flow with me, keep this current going.
I'm lost, take my hand... Show me how
this is supposed to go. Teach me how
to lose my fear and surrender to you.

I'll fall to my knees, only for your promise.
I'll close my eyes only to wake with you
still holding me. Don't destroy this, my
hope is growing. I am growing stronger.

Fall to your knees when the time is right,
I'll crown you in flowers, and allow you
into deeper levels of myself. Rise with
new understanding, and kiss me.

Quiver against my skin, I will show you passion.
I will teach you a new sense of adoration,
just gasp with me. Come into me,
I will teach you everything.

Reviews

[Dove]

This poem is really good. I like how the flow is like perfect. Its smooth and it keeps the readers attention. Its also very powerful. Beautiful poem!

[Ruth]

Ohh...this is so lovely! Sensual, elegant and piercing! Such sublime tones to this :) A remarkable flow also! Wonderful xoxo

[Walk away slow poet]

powerful wonderful write.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice love poem. Powerful stuff.

[Wandering Violet]

Mmmm, powerful and evocative in a very sensual way. Nice one!

[paradise]

Very good poem really enjoyable and interesting I really like the last stanza all in all loved the flow and the idea of it all waas really nice good choice and I think it was very shocking made me catch my breathe really detailed and just everything cant explain in words :)