If you felt like me, you'd feel nothing

Old habits die harder then apathy

Guilt and remorse smother me

Suffocating with no room to breathe

Saying every rotten thing

And now all that's left to see
Is torn skin that's meant to bleed

Reviews

[SoulSplatter]

Short but thought provoking. My only critic would be for the last two lines... All that's left to see is Torn skin meant to bleed. Without the word "is" ...it doesn't flow as well. Great write!

[alexbogan]

Actually that's an excellent point I'll edit that in thank you very much!

[SoulSplatter]

My pleasure :)