With angels

Poets of the fall - Late goodbye . I made this poetry for my dad that i lost when i was 7 years , even if i was a kid when i lost him i remember all the things i did with him , i love you dad

  With angels

       I am here alone , in the dark

       Dreams and desires

       I am thinkig about the past

       When i was young and you were here

       Now i'm alone and you are gone

       I fell so sad , so sad

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels , with angels

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels

       You were the best

       You made me like this

       You made me strong

       But it was a long time

       Even if i cry now or sream

       You can't come back

       

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels , with angels

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels

   

       I know you hear me

       And i know you see me

       11 years since you left

       Passed so slowly

       But it's ok for me 

       Cuz i know you're there 

             

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels , with angels

       Now you are up there

       In to the sky

       With angels

              Now you are up there

              In to the sky

              With angels , with angels

              Now you are up there

              In to the sky

              With angels

   

Author's Note

Poets of the fall - Late goodbye . I made this poetry for my dad that i lost when i was 7 years , even if i was a kid when i lost him i remember all the things i did with him , i love you dad

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

wonderful tribute to your father...beautiful work.

[TheAdamBryant]

thank you

[Pax]

lovely it fits for a song. great!

[TheAdamBryant]

thank you

[Fighter/Lover]

I love this:) its so sweet. with such emotion

[TheAdamBryant]

thank you

[Amanda J. S.]

I am so sorry :-( it is really sad....

[TheAdamBryant]

i know , but it's okay he watches me from heaven , and this makes me happy everyday

[Amanda J. S.]

yeah, I can imagine it must be nice to know :-)

[TheAdamBryant]

yeah it's nice

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Alex, Thank you for sharing such an emotional piece about your father. Such a lovely poem with so much love in it!

[TheAdamBryant]

thank you John

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I am a father but also miss my father. Keep writing.

[Harley (arbiter)]

great poem. it could be a song. i really liked this.

[TheAdamBryant]

thank you very much , poets of the fall inpired me , again thank you