Pain Of The Insecure

Caring is a prostitute in the disguise of a virgin.

she has claimed more victims than cancer,

                                                        but every time she calls I don’t hesitate to answer.                                                                     She has taken so many people away from me,

but when I’m with her I can’t help feeling free.

She rescues me as I begin to drown,

and makes me feel strong as she secretly tears me down.                                                           

When she left I contemplated suicide,

        and would have done it if Elia wasn’t there to be my guide.                                                            My life was wasted when she was nowhere near,

and the day she left I ran out of fear.

Now she has returned and begins to taunt me,

but my past experiences still remain to haunt me. 

Reviews

[Strawberry Evil]

Woah... Made cold shivers go trough my spine. Such strong emotions, so well written. I also like the structure. I like it really much.

[Alexander Cain]

Thank you very much.