Say 'I do'

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Let's journey through love's
circumference;
Let's tease and defy distance.
Let's us engrave our names on
the rock of love.
Leave a tale behind, that folks will
forever be speaking of.
Let's love till we hate each other.
And if we don't, then we'll keep
sticking closer to each other;
Always growing stronger, getting
ever better;
Loving each other more, the fire
getting hotter.
Let's live in love and forget about
the world outside.
Scratch the compus and the sun,
our hearts will be the guide.
Let me love you however you'd
like me to.
Just take my hand, and my ring
and say 'I do.'


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Reviews

[TLK]

I can really imagine your poetry being spoken. It has an excellent quality of being intoned by someone -- at a poetry reading, or just somewhere so that someone can express themselves.
The subject matter of this one made it easiest for me to comment on it. It's very hopeful about romance, progressive about the growth that two people can achieve together. There's also some excellent wordplay, I love "tease and defy distance", and the opposition of "love till we hate".

[Alexander143]

Thanks TLK, I sincerely appreciate.