The Wind

Random thoughts

The Wind


Can you feel that?...
Listen. Take it in. Breathe... The wind, that's what.
Can you hear the fluency of the
freedom in it's speeches?
Can you feel the sensation that lingers on every part of your body that it slowly
touches?
Close your eyes, clear your mind. Can your feel
it's sweet caress?
The life in it's ceremonial dance
on your face.
Yes, the breeze comes to life at
night.
It breathes under the silver moonlight.
Feel it blow and whisper.
Let it sink, inner and deeper.
Let it flow through your soul,
your heart and mind.
Because tonight, I'm like the wind,
Carefree and lawless.
Laden with charm and
tenderness.
Let me surround your existance.
Let me in, let me through, just
this once.


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Author's Note

Done in under a min, but you can still review it. Lol

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I really liked the way this made me feel as if I were being led in a meditation...a lesson in being, and feeling. When I came to
"Because tonight, I'm like the wind, "
it was magical! As if opening my eyes from feeling the wind as seeing its personification. This was an experience!

[Alexander143]

I wish I could paint a picture of how thankful I am. It's people like you that give me energy to move on.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

You have made my day! It was a pleasure to find your work...truly.
You are welcome and thank you right back. :) - Claire

[Alexander143]

Thank you. _ Sylvester

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Oh my God this is brilliant and just what I was saying write from your soul. In a minute you put this down from in you!

[Alexander143]

Thanks alot John. I'm glad I could impress you.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Alexander you are a young man with feelings and talent. You are also humble and intellegent. A wonderful combination!

[Alexander143]

I was going to say 'Thank you,' but, the expression is worn out now. The feeling in it has slackened. It sounds as cliche as, 'Roses are red.' But on second thought, that's how I feel. I wish the alphabet had more letters than 26. That way, I could say 'Thank you' and you'd understand just how extraordinary my gratitude is. You're very encouraging and warm.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Don't even try just be you!

[Dark Tower]

Refreshingly original.

[Alexander143]

Thanks alot B.C. I wish I could address you by your name... :(