True Lies

True Lies

A Poem by Alexander143
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Just messing with words.

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True Lies

Open your two eyes-
As I feed you with true life.
There's a party in the blue skies-
With cute chicks and cool guys.
Having fun as they drink and chew pies,
Wasted, they're gone and acting their shoe size.
And as the crew highs,
There's an accident. But who cries-
When one more fool dies?

Sshhh...

That aside, there's a new rise.
Come nigh, I want to see your brain's true size,
So, you either go back now, or, you're too wise.
But worry not, you have two tries.
Question is; how do you stick to the script when the glue dries?


Keep Smiling

© 2012 Alexander143


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That last line instills intrigue and wonder in the whole piece, and the rhyming was extremely well done. I absolutely love the s**t out of this one. 100/100!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Alexander143

12 Years Ago

Thanks alot Ivy. *Trying not to blush*

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Alexander143
Alexander143

Lusaka, Lusaka, Zambia



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I love poetry, making friends, having a good time and watching cartoons. more..

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A Poem by Alexander143