I could be...

Different views of the same thing

Harder...Faster...
The trend of life it's own.
Sadder...Bitter...
The tough are already gone.

Louder...wetter...
The deluge of sin is on.
Broader...hotter...
The line has been drawn.

I could be a sadist-
Cuz love's overrated.
I could be a pessimist-
Cuz hope is rejected.
I could be a racist-
Cuz colors are separated.
I could be a terrorist-
Cuz the rules are neglected.
I could be anything on the list,
But my life Jah has protected.
Thus, I'm a realist,
Welcoming the souls repented.


Keep Smiling

Author's Note

What do you feel I should change? Is there any particular line that you loved? All feedback and criticism is welcome.

Reviews

[Becky]

Just a few minor things:
Second line- no comma needed (I'm pretty sure, not 100%)
First line last stanza- "sadist" not "saddist"

Other than that, nice job! It flows well and has a good point. If I were not too tired to ponder, I would be pondering right now. As it is, I shall simply have to add this to my favorites list to ponder at a later date. :)

Seriously, nice job. The last two lines are simply marvelous.

[Alexa Tasch]

"Thus, I'm a realist" I really liked that line. It brought the whole poem to a nice close. It flowed well and had a good theme. Well done!

[pumpkin head]

I could be a saddist-
Cuz love's overrated.
I could be a pessimist-
Cuz hope is rejected.

I really loved this part, Nicely worded.