I hate that...

I hate that...

A Poem by Alexander143
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I hate myself because I can't hate you enough.

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I hate that I cant hate you
enough to leave you.
I hate it when you tell me lies but
I still believe you.

I hate to deem doubting your
falsehood as being unfair to you.
I hate it cuz no matter what color
you mutate into, I'm always there
for you.

I hate the way I always apologise
even when I dont hurt you.
I hate it cuz you never get to eat
the dirt too.

I hate it cuz you dont love me as
much as you ought to.
But because there's nothing I can do about it, its me that I really hate, not
you.


Keep Smiling.

© 2012 Alexander143


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I love this! I can truly relate to this, since I knew I wanted to leave one of my ex boyfriends when we were dating even after finding out all of his lies. I never had enough courage to do so! I always apologized to him, even though it was his fault. I'm a forgiving person anyways. Great write, indeed! :D

Mistakes:
The word 'cuz' would sound or flow better if you wrote it out like this -- 'cause.
(I hate the way I always apologise)-- * I hate the way I always apologize*

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love this! I can truly relate to this, since I knew I wanted to leave one of my ex boyfriends when we were dating even after finding out all of his lies. I never had enough courage to do so! I always apologized to him, even though it was his fault. I'm a forgiving person anyways. Great write, indeed! :D

Mistakes:
The word 'cuz' would sound or flow better if you wrote it out like this -- 'cause.
(I hate the way I always apologise)-- * I hate the way I always apologize*

Ashley Rivers-- Keep writing! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Alexander143
Alexander143

Lusaka, Lusaka, Zambia



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I love poetry, making friends, having a good time and watching cartoons. more..

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A Poem by Alexander143