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there was a girl about 15..
 her mommy beat her and her daddy was a drunk
 Her friends thought she was fine,,
 but they were wrong
 and there she is swinging
 its over for her now
 and on her note all it said was "A rope ends it all!"
 Now her mom is crying
 and her dad is getting drunk
 its all their fault and they know it
 thats what happens
 she was such a pretty girl and now no one will know
 All the f*****g s**t she was put through
 except her new born brother
 who will go through it all
 and on his note all it said was "A ROPE ENDS IT ALL!!!"

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[Amelia May]

oh my...
Corrective criticism of course...
at the end it says "and on his note all it said was "A rope ends it all!!!"
but I thought that the brother was unborn?
Did you mean "on her note" or am I missing something entirely?