my rain

my rain

A Poem by Alex Vandool

transfixed by the rain

that lashes down around me

drowning memories

lightning flashes far away

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transformed by the rain´s

enchanting patterns

gentle splish-splash rhythm motion

heavy over flow

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my rain falls steady

soaks me blissful

drenching clothes and seeping

cold beneath my skin

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can´t you feel the rain reach over to me

clouds gorgeous cover

over constant seas

of pounding wave and sparkle change

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now i watch the death mask

rain washes all the rest away

ninety-nine day fever growing

see can you walk away

© 2018 Alex Vandool


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Rain can be a fresh new start...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rain can be so uplifting, healing, and delicious! This is an inspiring write. Thank you!

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Beautifully written. I look forward to reading more of your work.

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Added on February 5, 2008
Last Updated on October 3, 2018

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Alex Vandool
Alex Vandool

Paris, France



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