You are NOT my father

F**k you Scott Sedmak

Financially you supported me, 

fed me and clothed me.

That was all you could do,

You could not come through.

You loved Ben the most,

Told me "Alex you're gross"

Audrianna was your precious princess

Hugging her so often it was practically incest.

I wanted to work at the lego factory.

"Alex thats in another country sorry."

Ben was your little sports star. 

You jumped on that bandwagon and drove it too far.

I wanted to train Orcas at Sea World

"Alex its too late" you practically hurled.

You have to learn young, practically seven.

M**********r I was ONLY ELEVEN.

Audrianna had sleepovers and friends,

I had chores, homework, dead ends. 

If backtalked at all I was smacked around.

If Ben backtalked you didn't hear a sound.

Why was I different? Why didn't you care?

Why was your treatment of me so unfair?

I am now gone and not coming back. 

You're an a*****e, a failure; Scott thats a fact.

We share the same blood, share the same name.

But for our separation only you are to blame.

You should have equally loved all your kids.

But instead you ignored me so I became this.

Reviews

[Katethepoet]

"We share the same blood, share the same name.
But for our separation only you are to blame.
You should have equally loved all your kids.
But instead you ignored me so I became this."
Love these lines. This is a really raw and enjoyable poem. I really liked. I liked your dedication to rhyming as well.

[AlexValkyrie]

Thank you so much :)

[MandaBear]

Amazing write. I really felt the hurt and the anger that was in this poem. Great job!! Keep up the good work!

[K.N. Herzner]

I sensed the pain, frustration, and hurt. It's a sad poem, but this is a great poem.

[Savanna]

Nicely written, I can feel the emotions in the words.

[Cindy Marietta]

Super relatable. Awesome poem with a lot of emotion.

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Wow! Such bitter resentment towards the end but totally justified. I was drawn in to this piece, enjoying the flow. Great write!

[AlexValkyrie]

Thank you very much. :)