Captivated

Just give your opinions, I'm new to this stuff

From where does that soft skipping drum beat sound

That weakens my young heart when you're around

Impetuously leading to your guard?

It follows heaven's bright eye that does always appear

The same one that removes my reason fear

With such warmth, you stand and bask in my regard

To where do my complications swiftly flee?

In my angst patterned mind, they cease to be

From a whisper kinder than the winter wind's

For an uncharted course these feet have tread miles

And without my permission I vault into smiles

When you say you will know me for all of my sins

So confine me to your cave and ignite my body

My madness results from my own acts of folly

Those charms have only lead yourself to my arms

Reviews

[Don't find me]

"so confine me to your cave and ignite my body" i like the rhythm of this line, and the imagery. you ask to be brought unto me and i oblige, making your body ache with fire.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
Your poem has word brush strokes that are vivid in color giving the reader a poem mosaic that’s vibrant. I really enjoyed your poem.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear