Falling

Falling

A Poem by Alex
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Couldn't think of a title

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Without the warmth of your soft skin against mine, I yearn for your embrace
Tormented and covet I remain. Show me again your sweet face
Then I realise, you've tricked me into falling, one more time
You are my faith when there is none; a friend loveth at all times

© 2011 Alex


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My Dear Writing Friend,
I mused this one through the night and found it still swirling around my head this morning like a dust devil. I guess it just made me think of co-dependent relationships. For my self I would rather just have a dog team for my family and friends than a person who tricks their supposed friends.
A good write that for this reader had a clear message, chose ones friends very carefully and be sure if they are to be a best friend they are mentally, emotionally, and spiritually healthy.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear


Posted 13 Years Ago


yearning is an exhausting emotion, making one act out and behave in a way that is out of character.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on July 12, 2011
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Alex
Alex

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