Substances

The tip of your finger signals the end of the world.

The running substances in my body escape through my wounds

and still the tip of your finger points towards my bleeding soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful used of words and thoughts. I wanted to know and read more. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

Very powerful words!
Keep on writing!

[PoeticChico]

Thanks! :)

[Valentine]

Deep and very romantic. Valentine

[PoeticChico]

Thank you for your comment!

[iamshadowine]

wow! This is deep! and i love it! :D
Great work I must say :)

"and still the tip of your finger points towards my bleeding soul"
my personal favorite!

keep writing :D

[PoeticChico]

Thank you so much!