![]() The Old SoldierA Story by AlexJCarr![]() Short fantasy story. In an attempt to repent, Oxer travels to an old fort he had raided ten years past.![]() It had been ten years since Oxer had
last seen the fort. A small unimportant property somewhere far away from the
capital. The perfect target for the old group of highwaymen he led. Oxer ran
his fingers against the sword strapped to his waist. He had left that life
behind him and had come to return the
final reminder. Oxer approached the forts large wooden doors, the axes that he
had used to break in were still left on the ground next to a hole in the doors.
Oxer climbed through into the fort. The entryway was lit by a series of candles
placed carefully on the floor as well as the light which intruded from the hole
had climbed through. He turned to take
note of the doors location but instead noticed it overrun by a new green glow.
Long, thin fingers clasped the back of Oxers belt. The rusted steel
clasp pricked his stomach as he fell to the ground, releasing a small trickle
of blood. Oxers face hit the cold stone floor. A booming crack echoed
throughout the hallway. His nose had
cracked in two places. Blood streamed from his nostrils, some funnelling into
his mouth while the rest collected in a pool on the stone. His mouth was open, though he could not
muster a scream. He could taste the iron. Reaching out with both bands Oxer
grabbed the edges on one of the stone tiles. Slowly, he pulled himself along. His
fingernails reached the next stone tile
but where meet with resistance. Long fingers wrapped around his ankle. The
hairs on his leg shot up and like a wave so did the rest of the hair on his body. Oxer refused to let
go. Even as his finger nails splintered and cracked, even as the skin
underneath split open and yet more blood pooled on the ground. The grip around
his ankle tightened, and despite his cries and begs to be released the creature
dragged him deeper into the forts bowls. He could see the sword, which had
strapped to his waist was now sitting the pool of blood near the wooden doors.
Due to a mixture of both fear and blood loss, Oxer had fallen into
unconsciousness. When the blood began clotting at his wounds and his brain had
regained its composure, Oxer was able to open his eyes. Though this did not elicit any feelings of comfort as he was
surrounded by complete silent darkness.
The kind of darkness that Oxer had only seen before under his bed as a child.
Illusions of monsters and goblins clawed their way into Oxers mind the same way
they did when he would lay awake at night and pull the covers off himself to protect from whatever was hiding in that
blackness underneath his bed. Suddenly, these illusions were banished by a more
immediate threat. A great clanking echoed through the room, like the chains on
a drawbridge. No, it was the exactly the same as the chains on a drawbridge. It
was then realisation hit. The darkness had confused Oxers senses, but he could
still feel around, was lying back against some kind of stone. Not the same as
the tiled floor in the hallway, it was far smoother, far more crafted. He
couldn’t move his legs far apart before reaching the edge of the stone, as he
could feel his feet and head planted firmly against its edges. The stone curved
upwards as if he was in a bowl. The
clanking had gotten closer now, and finally,
Oxers understood his situation. Adrenaline shot through his veins and he raised
his arms to catch the lid of the coffin. Thankfully, while it was also made of
stone the lid was not thick and Oxer could halt
its advance,
but only for a time. After a few minutes, the lid of the coffin
began to fall, threating to entrap him there forever. He could feel scratch
marks on the inside of the lid. Whatever that creature was it had no intention
of ever releasing him. If he loosened his grip for only a second, the lid would
fall and he would certainly be buried alive. He fingers were still bloody from
the skin which had split under his nails making it difficult and painful to
maintain his grip. Ten seconds felt like a year as he heard his muscles begin
to creak and moan, all thought turned to one singular goal. Survival. His
senses reached out, looking for something that could help him escape. A brief
sound, a hidden clasp, anything. It was then a faint scent hit his nose. It was
a nostalgic smell, the smell of a youthful springtime spent playing tag in the
fields. Daisies. If there were flowers, he must be near the surface. If he was near the surface, someone might
hear him if he screamed for help. Oxer took a deep breath in, holding in as
much air as his lungs would allow, but before he could unleash his cry another
smell snuck into his nostrils. Again, a familiar smell, but not from his youth.
He had encountered this smell dozens of
times whilst raiding. It was putrid. A smell which turned the sweat on his brow
cold and forced the breath out of his lungs. Like rotting meat. It was the
smell of corpses. The perfect fertiliser. As the smell invaded his nostril and his
breath began to leave his body, Oxer thought of the reason he came to this
place, and the sword he had lost when he first entered the fort. His mind, now
invested with the rotting smell, travelled back to his youth once again. To the
seaside picnics, he would have with his
family. His Mother would be walking along the beach, tracing the sea with her
steps and he would be playing soldier in
the sand " making castles and acting out great battles. Remembering the calm
sea breeze blow specks of sand off his
hands made Oxer’s grip loosen further. He remembered
the conversations he would have with his father, the one piece of advice he
would always give, night after night until it was all Oxer could think about
and loathe over. “Living with regrets is
fine, just so long as you don’t die with them.” The memory of
these words sparked newfound life within
him and like a predator backed into a corner, Oxer summoned a great feat of
strength. Not only stop the stone lids advance but push it back. The chains which
carried it crumpled back. They clashed against one another like bickering
children. The smell of daisies returned
with a fervour and with one final push Oxer made enough room to crawl from the
coffin, hitting the ground hard splitting his lower lip. A thin line of blood
burst from the cut and crawled its way down Oxers face. He raised his
head and smiled, before wincing at the pain coming from his cut. The room was
still a pitch black. Oxer began moving slowly in one direction, hoping to
encounter a wall which he could follow to an exit. After a few steps, he bumped into something, placing his
hands on the surface of this unknown
object he could feel a smooth, cool surface. Tracing the edges and focusing in
on the smell his suspicions were confirmed. This was another coffin. The smell
of rotting reached full intensity. Oxer took a deep breath in before continuing
along his path. However, after a few more steps he ran into another object,
placing his hands upon it, he realised it
was another coffin. Oxer retracted his hands quickly and continued walking,
quickly, passing more and more coffins on his way. His cold sweat returned. Spinning around he chose another
direction, now he was running. Once again, his path was blocked. Oxer closed
his eyes, despite the darkness of the room and sat on the ground. Images of men
and women buried alive spun in his head, screaming for help, finger tips cut and oozing blood as they tried in vain to
scratch their way out. It was then
Oxer heard a voice. A faint voice, so faint he couldn’t make out what it was
saying, but he was convinced he needed to help. What if someone else was
trapped in one of these stone boxes? Frantically
Oxer stumbled closer to the voice, ignoring the coffins he was hitting on the
way. The smells of daisies and corpses
which were fighting for control of his senses had ceased. Oxer’s entire being
was focused on finding the location of this voice, of helping whoever it
belonged to. Finally, he reached the coffin the sound was coming from, once
again he summoned his strength to force the lid off. It came crashing the ground,
filling the darkness with an explosion of sound. When it had settled, Oxer could no longer hear the voice.
He thrust his hands into this new coffin only to find that it was empty.
Suddenly, a green light filled the room. Oxer turned and facing him was the
apparition which had trapped him here and tied to its belt was the sword Oxer
had carried, though now it was as transparent as the apparition and emitted a
similar green hue. The sword had been returned to its owner. Oxer looked up at the old soldier, tears in his eyes before climbing into
the empty coffin. A new lid came down but this time he did not fight it. The
lid scraped the coffins stone edges as it sealed him in the dark. Oxer took a
deep breath in through his nose to smell the daisies
once again before closing his eyes to sleep. © 2017 AlexJCarr |
StatsAuthorAlexJCarrMilton Keynes, Bucks, United KingdomAbout20 years old and studying a media production and creative writing degree at the University of Northampton. more..Writing
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