I think of your smile, your sparkling teeth. I think of your eyes, mellow... deep.
The world is asleep today. The clouds have kept the sun away. We were like two adventurers roaming deserted lands.
For hours we'd walk, staring in awe. The crystalized trees, the frozen white ground. The sun came through and our world caught on fire. Everything sparkled and shimmered.
When the snow falls, I think of you.
I remember marshmellowed hot chocolate. Disney movies into the afternoon. Reading Nancy Drew and The Hardy Boys watching the snow fall more.
When the snow falls, I think you.
I remember going to you. The snow covered the stone with a cold blanket. Even a blanket this cold must be warmer than your cold body. The tears I cried were warm.
I remember going to you.
The snow covered the stone with a cold blanket.
Even a blanket this cold must be warmer than your cold body.
The tears I cried were warm.
I loved these lines, great poem, i'm gonna read your some more stiffs.....97.9 / 100 :)
I love how throughout the poem you have - "When the snow falls, I think of you" and at the end it goes to "Whenever the snow falls, I miss you." It ties it together wonderfully.
I'm not one for poetry, but this is incredibly sweet and touching. I like the repetition of the line, "When the snow falls, I think of you" and then at the end you change its' pattern to "Whenever the snow falls, I miss you". It's sad, but relatable. Captures the feeling of truly missing someone when you recall these small memories that would otherwise seem insignificant to outsiders.
I am twenty-nine years old, and live in Dresden.
I consider myself a writer; not merely one who writes and creates because it’s fun, but because I have no other choice. It is a drive within m.. more..