Predator

Shining hair, flashing eyes
Cross her path, I dare you. Try.
She'll crush your heart and watch you die.
See the evil deep within.
There is no beauty beneath her skin.

She will hate you, despise you, abuse and defile you.
Marred by past events, she executes revenge.
She feeds off your lust; she'll fuel your desire.
Can you not see what a beast you admire? 

Hips sway; heels click
you place your heart on her fingertips.
Neurotic mess; bloodlust
sacrificing her body to destroy your soul.

Innocent smile, shy eyelashes
vomiting evil beneath the surface.
Decaying skin beneath the makeup. 

She hides her eyes, you think it's cute.
Shy smiles invite you; how could you refuse? 
Beneath the hair; just under the eyelashes
her eyes scream blood; she plots your demise.

Shy smiles suppress her gory grin.
You think you're in love; look beneath her skin.

She has been hurt, betrayed, scarred. Damaged goods. Marred. Tossed and beaten. Screamed at, thrown away. If you knew the truth behind her disdain you would reel in horror. Filled with dismay. Men like you have made her this way. It's not your fault, but she doesn't differentiate. It's no excuse, she could move on; refuse to be the monster she's become.

Her insecurities mask her disgust and contempt. 
So innocent, inexperienced, you cannot detect
the s**t hiding in that pure white dress.

Don't trust your eyes
flee for your life.
She hungers, she craves
when she's done
she'll throw
you
away.

Smiles like an angel
so vulnerable, laid bare
you want to protect her.
You fool.
Beware.

You're in love with a lie.
Ignore my plea, run for her
straight to the claws of a predator.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. The description made the character come alive. Never know what you will get when something is too good to be true.
"Smiles like an angel
so vulnerable, laid bare
you want to protect her."
A outstanding poem with a very strong story.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...and there is truth...enough men hurt women...and vice versa..that we all become predators in some way, seeking revenge, even if it is only in the subconscious.

wonderfully descriptive piece.

[zainul]

A perfect depiction of revengeful s**t.
The poet has tried her best to inform all about the predator.
Now,it is the personal responsibility of the person who approach her to get trapped.
However,the poet has indicated how the innocent girl became a revengeful s**t.

[Alex Zynder]

See the evil deep within.
There is no beauty beneath her skin.

i really like this line, and the poem is strong beginning to end. i look forward to more of your writing

[Jonathan De Elvira]

This is such a strong piece for me...There's one or more sentences that stood out and it rhymes well in my mind...I like it...I like it a lot actually...

[r]

This is f*****g amazing [pardon my language, but it IS true]. I absolutely LOVE the metaphor that is used throughout the poem, and the slight imagery that someone can come up. I love the choice of words throughout it, and I love the form. Very amazing concept, I love it. Predator - a s**t, a w***e, an evil b***h. Just freaking fantastical. And I love it, for sure. (:

[Cassiopia Summers]

I really like this piece. You've created a great poem. I love the length. It flows well, and creates good imagery.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

a very good dramatic read I liked it :)

[Dr. S. D. Blankenship D..]

Predator is an intense read in poetry. I must say it sounds like every person goes though, male or females. It's a harsh life and you know you can't win. The pain from this poems sits off dark and dread-full allures. I love it!

P. S. The girl in this poem, sounds like most of the girls on the Cafe, here.

[Justin Littlefield]

Wow this captures a certain girl I was with for a while. It makes me flash back on a past of sour memories. Very well done. It perfectly portrays the siren, the succubus so many women have become.