Loss

Loss

A Poem by Alex Crow

I look in their empty eyes

Nothing

Nothing but the fear they'd had before I killed them

300

400

500

THE ENTIRE CITY!

I HAVE SLAIN THEM ALL

 

Who is going to stop me?

 

Damon?

Please

 

He is dead

 

The only man who could controll me is dead

The only man who ever cared

Is dead

 

Why did you leave me in this terrible place alone?

 

You were like the father I never had

Now I have nobody

© 2012 Alex Crow


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You've created a dangerous character in this poem. Who knows what he is capable of and what he'll do next. A scary one. Nice job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Alex Crow

12 Years Ago

It's a she
A lot of hate and anger is put into this, nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago
Painful write .

Posted 12 Years Ago
A lot of hatred in this. Nice work.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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 Added on May 7, 2012
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Alex Crow
Alex Crow

Gilbert, AZ



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I'm 15 and the majority of my live people have made fun of me. I started writing to let out the anger I feel. My favorite things are writing poetry, short stories, knives,fire, country music and playi.. more..

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