Who am I?

This is a poem I had writen in grade 9 for an Autobiography about ourselfs in English class.

Black darkness

Nothing to see,

No ones around

Its only me.

 

All alone

No one to hold,

Time goes by

It can’t be sold.

 

Some fake smiles,

Some fake laughs,

No ones here

On this one lane path.

 

Some feelings show

But I keep most inside,

I am not going to grow

Until I say ‘Good-bye’.

 

I will always keep wishing

And always hold onto hope,

Never like to be seen weeping

Or even let out a mope.

 

Friends and family say they all love me

But I don’t feel a thing,

I feel hollow and cold inside

But is it I just don’t believe?

 

I say I love them

And I really do,

But I want to feel real love

I want to feel something new.

 

With all these feelings

Bottled up inside,

My heart is bleeding

I hope I don’t die.

 

I finally reached the end

The end of my path,

To hit a fork

And don’t now where or how to last.

 

Side one is alone

With nowhere to go,

As the other has another.

So I sigh.

 

One will lead

The way I just came,

To go back

Back to the past.

 

As two will lead ahead

Not in a circle but a line,

Going straight to a sign

In which it will lead me to the future that is mine.

*                  *                  *

Black darkness fades

As the tiniest light spills,

Growing and growing and emerging

Until all is still.

 

Finding out

That I am never alone,

That as the time starts ticking

It brings me home.

 

Some real smiles,

Some real laughs,

I am never alone

On this two lane path.

Reviews

[Kaotic Barbie]

Beautiful. You are a VERY gifted writer. I love how you put this poem together and it feels so real to me. I have these same feelings like you do in this poem. Once again GJ! Your exceptionally talented.

[Requiem for a dream]

also i liked alexandria name :)

[Requiem for a dream]

in brief, Superb.
this is how the life is going.
keep going .
regards

[Jeff]

Nice poem.