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I wrote this last year when I was going through depression.

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empty
no love
for these are how i feel
being the english critic
always correct
thats not me
we all make mistakes for thats what makes us human
little miss perfect for that is how i wish you would always see me as
nothing gets me down
always looking for perfection
your killing me
because im not perfect
because im not the best
can you just leave me alone
im sorry im a disappointment
i just wanted love
is that not enough
to just love one another and accept people for how they are
to be accepted for who or what you are
theres alot of f*****g hurt in this world
get use to it cause its everywhere
death
though ill be missed
goodbye 

Author's Note

There are no grammar corrections in this and if you understand it then you will understand what I mean by this

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

The message and theme came across clearly in your ink. It makes me wonder if the mountain in life called depression is something everyone deals with in one form or another. Some seem to have larger mountains, while others smaller, but everyone seems to have some of those speed-bumps or pitfalls that life puts them through.

Inspiring Ink
Wolfie

[Luke Ritta]

this is a deep poem and very well done...great work.

[Krisen Lison]

This is beautifully done Alex, it tells a story and the way it flows is very nice despite the varying line lengths. Nice work.

[idk]

This just has so must meaning. Great job.

[Forest Green]

Glad you recovered from this low moment and hope that you're life is filled with warmth and friendliness...!

Nice work...your feelings are described in believable terms.

Steel

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This is so sad, I wouldn't say you're a disappointment, everyone has a purpose, Sorry you feel this way. Everyone needs accpetance agree with you there. Awesome write.