Just F*****g Kill Me

Do you really think I've forgot about these things?

We'll love the few happy moments we had together

You’ll start raving about good old times

And I’ll end up saying just the opposite words

No, I never really forgot those little stains

 

So if you’ll say you want to strangle me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to asphyxiate me

Even when my eyes tell you how much I hate you

 

And with your silence you pretended to tell me it didn’t happened 

But once my words got to your ears, past turned into present

The first and last warning to shut my mouth forever  

Because that what you saw on my lip wasn’t red ink

 

So if you’ll say you want to shoot me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to pull the trigger

Even when my eyes tell you how much I hate you

 

And I know we all go through hard times

But you made me go through hell because you “love me”

Just a week attempt to keep everything under your damn control

In this goddamn kingdom you own, this battlefield

 

So if you’ll say you want to behead me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s hope you got the guts to slit my throat

Even when you know I hate you

 

I just hope you regret about it

What made you think I had forgiven you?

I just hope you suffer about it

What makes you think I’ll ever do it?

 

So if you’ll say you want to kill me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

I’ll say just do it, just f*****g kill me

And let’s just hope you got the guts to do it

 

Author's Note

Stuff... Things I don't really want to talk about...
Please tell me what you think... reviews are welcome and thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Hailey]

perfectly amazing. i really like this, the anger and hatred is radiated here (though i guess that goes without say) strongly written, no hesitation at all and i love that. great write, awesome job.
P.S. Hi Ian! its been awhile not sure if u remember me haha...

[Almost Alive]

...grammer? Lmfao, oh, the irony.

The "just f*****g" lines lack flow. If you read everything, you cannot really "find" the flow, at least not at first sight, but of all sentences, this one stands out because of its lack of flow. You might want to shorten the sentence or remove the second f*****g (or the first if you please).

Hmmm if I contrast reality (of lately) vs this writing, I would say this is actually a very optimistic writing, while I would see everyone else thinking the opposite. Good job, you channeled darkness in ways seldom seen.

[...MysteryGirl...]

Wow.. Love it.
The meaning is incredible,
And the grammer too.
I really think this is really good.
Keep on writing. :)

[Mia Fin]

Wow. Sometimes I read things that really hit me in general, and other times I read things that really hit me on a personal level. This is one of the latter. I can DEFINITELY relate to the emotions and thoughts in this one. GREAT JOB!! Keep up the good work!!!!