Unforgetable

just a poem i wrote when i was dead bored studying a subject called Navigation, so books have finally become my muse.. hahahaha

I wanted to talk to you for old times' sake
Although you seemed afrad to reciprocate
I let go of you a long time ago
Yet a part of me cant let you go
Though I found someone I call my own
It is unfair like a rose's thorn
And everytime i think about you of late,
I vow it will be my last
But the memories will never fade,
for you always seem to last
And Hues of you, so very vivid
Its my cue, to continue to as I did
Yes, you had gone without turning back
And I was left staring at your back
You made me whole, then fulfilled
now left a hole, none can fill
I still think of you before I rest
And every day, these moments are the best
Now I wonder when i will start living my life
for its time I stop living the lovliest lie.
So until the day, I am laid to earth.
with all the broken peices of my heart,
               I will love you.
 

 

Reviews

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Its hard when love isn't reciprocated. :) ---mishel

[Touché Armada]

Hey, was good to see, you know, know you still breath and world is better for it and all that.
Sad sad sad sad agh blah what do I say about this poem? I want to say I hate it really and only because of the content and nothing more. So if I say it's not a bad poem but I hate it.. Is that a sucky review? I guess it is really, but thats how it made me feel. The last line makes it feel broken, and though its a beautiful sort of surrender in a way, I dont know, it seems hurt, it is a big bit of hurt lot of verse, and it doesnt make the story any nicer, its too real maybe, and I'm just rambling and tired and should go back to bed LOL.
I suck sorry =/ Maybe the next one will feel a bit different.
TC