Clouds xD

puffy white clouds :3

White clouds up above
The puffy little creatures I love
Floating so high
How I wish I could fly
I'll join their line
And I'd lose track of time
We watch them overhead
As I lay there in my bed
Such a beautiful sight
They're always so bright
Even when they're mellow
They remind me of a bright Cello

Reviews

[Nikole]

I love clouds, and I really love the poem and the memories from the times I watched the clouds in the sky. My only suggestion is minor, in the second to last line their should be they're. Also, I'm not sure what Cello is?