You have been the one

That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

You have been the

One for us father

Also father

You keep us  alive

Every single day

Here on earth

Also father

You have made us

With your holy hands

A long time ago

And you also father

Had placed us on

Earth to live

Father we love

To live on earth

Also, we have

Lots of friends

That you also made

With your holy hands

A long time ago

And also they are

Living here on earth

And I also must

Tell you that

They are very happy

To be living on earth

Father, I must tell you

That I pray also

Every single night for you

Before I go to bed

Reviews

[Spamalott]

"i am Aldo Kraas I been writing poems For 25 years "

This is poetry? Self-important pretend religious talk? Praising your made-up deity as if she or he reads what's posted on Writers Cafe?

Aint nothing in this that comes from the Bible. It's just you, bowing, pontificating, and sounding like the preacher in Montey Python's, The Meaning of Life:

Let us praise God. Oh Lord…

Oooh you are so big…

So absolutely huge.

Gosh, we’re all really impressed down here I can tell
you.

Forgive Us, O Lord, for this dreadful toadying.

But you are so strong and, well, just so super.

Amen.