She is like the wind

That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

She is like the wind

Her wind is

Making people’s face

To be frozen

During the Winter

It is awful because

It starts to hurt

I am sure every body

Hates when it happens

To there faces

I personally hate that

Reviews

[Kitterman]

Looks great! The poem has vivid imagery and the coldness of the vibes that the poem gives is amazing but I don't read a lot of poems so maybe someone might give you a better criticism than me.