Can I win your love back?

That is an old poem Written by Aldo Kraas

Can I win you love back

My God

Because I am living

Without any love

And no body

Is giving me love

Not even my friends

Father I would love

To receive some love

From you

Can you do that for me ?

Am I asking to much father

Please be honest and tell me

Reviews

[Inessa]

Nothing can make us sadder than living a life without the tender embrace of love. Your pleas are genuine and completely legitimate and I hope they are heard. I appreciate the honesty in your words, Aldo. ❤

[AJNJ]

Always sad when love is hard to come by. God should be more generous. Nicely written.

[AYVID N]

No, it isn't asking too much from the Father or expecting love and attention from one's friends. A very touching poem. Please keep writing.