I know you will excuse me if I say good night father

That is a new poem Written by Aldo Kraas

I know you will excuse me if I say good night father

Because I am already falling asleep

And my body is sending warning messages

Now

And I am skiping my dinner

That is nothing a good think to do

Father

But father please understand that

I am tired

End I don’t care for food when

I am tired

Now is getting late already

And I will lay down

Now on my bed

Then I shut my mind of

Then I will close my eyes and

Drift away into a deep sleep

And the only thing I hear is me

Breathing away

Reviews

[Aldo kraas]

You seem to me to hate men
And you are a sick lady in the head
You need to stop judging people
Also I been doing poetry for 26 years

[Spamalot]

"I know you will excuse me if I say good night father"
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You've been writing this badly for 25 years? Naaa... You obviously don't work, so you're apparently in an "institution" of some kind, with access to an Internet connection and nothing else to do.

"And I am skiping my dinner
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And after 25 years you still can't spell? That's some kind of record.


"End I don’t care for food when"
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Or, edit.

You can spew, though... but that's not a talent, it's a condition.