Bleeding heart

Bleeding heart

A Poem by Aldo kraas
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That is an old poem Written by Aldo Kraas

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I can't understand
Why the day before
You were fine
Walking with me
In the park
You were so happy
You felt like somebody
Had lifted you up
I think it was God
Anyway
And the next day
You had died
Early in the morning

© 2021 Aldo kraas


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I feel like in the end of your poem you should add more of a rhyme but other than that I really loved it and Im interested with what happened!

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Added on December 14, 2021
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Aldo kraas
Aldo kraas

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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i am Aldo Kraas I been writing poems For 25 years In 2011 I self published 3 chapbooks more..

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