We adore you

The poem We adore you is an old poem That was written by Aldo Kraas

We adore you
Father for giving the
Life we live here on earth
Every single day
Also we are very religious father
And we pray for you
Every single night
Before we go to bed
Please understand father
That we never forget to pray
For you
Also father
It was you that had placed us
Here on earth
After you made us
In you image
Also we are glad
That we treat every body with
Respect
Also the other people that
Is living here on earth is our
Brothers
We treat each other with respect
Also when the night arrives here on earth
It will be time for us to retired for the night

Reviews

[Spamalot]

Really? Line after line of rhymed couplets with forced Moon/June rhymes? Worse yet, you present it as a letter to someone unknown, as if the reader wants to know how some random person on the Internet feels.

You’ve dumped a s**t-load of poems like this on the site, work you claim are old poems, with lines like:

“But the homeless freeze to death in the streets of Philadelphia and even die”

So lots of people “freeze to death,” AND they die, too? Did you even edit your work before you dumped it here? Doesn’t seem so.

If you’re going to keep pumping out poems, and inflicting it on the members, at least take the time to read a few books on poetry and learn how.