foot fall ... a toe meant

atonement or a torment: let your walk do the talking

Every step I've taken

on the road of my life

has lead me to where my feet are now.

 

As I know where my feet are,

I have the beginning of where I'm going

and the end of where I've been.

 

Hey, watch where you’re going, I'm walking here !!!

 

 

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Reviews

[Shelly Wiseberg]

Dont tread on my shoes man this path of direction is mine through the twists and turns of the winding road
your feet will take you places from the familiar to the unknown. Last line great love it!

[Sarah]

That is so cute! lol, a humorous and whimsical take on the powerful truism:) Write on!

Sarah

[An Ordinary Woman]

This is excellent, fantastic ... it's fun too but it's all so true.

Love it!

[Emily B]

I am here. Where my feet are. Perfectly sensible to me. :-D

[Antonio Aguilar]

Nice way to sum things up, accurate.

[George Love]

Great idea. Recognition of where you are helps you understand where you have been and where you might go.

[Riverdance]

50 words of great ideas, here.

"Hey, watch where you're going, I'm walking here ..."
That reminds me of times when people are trying to do what I'm doing. Hehe
But I usually say "Go do your own thing".

Thanks for sharing! This is great!
~Rd

[Amor-de-angel]

Such great strong meaningful words...you said a lot in a few...

[Marie]

Great work, Pema. When you write, whether it's twenty lines or three lines, so much comes through. Feelings and thoughts. You make the reader stop and think about what you've written. That is an amazing and wonderful gift. Loved it!

[H. A. M.]

That Rizo philosophy! May I sit at your feet sensi?